I don’t think the super-pale colors are going to work very well on a product page, or in a lineup of thumbnails. Look at some covers on Amazon. It’s going to fade right into the background! Not what you want. Your name looks good, though.
I agree with Jeff. Sharpen and contrast the Capitol, and maybe a bright blue sky, maybe some bureaucratic-looking folks going about their business on the steps (or a press conference of something typically Capitol-looking), oblivious to that big dripping Dagger of Death in the foreground.
Richard Bowker 
I don’t think the super-pale colors are going to work very well on a product page, or in a lineup of thumbnails. Look at some covers on Amazon. It’s going to fade right into the background! Not what you want. Your name looks good, though.
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I agree with Jeff. Sharpen and contrast the Capitol, and maybe a bright blue sky, maybe some bureaucratic-looking folks going about their business on the steps (or a press conference of something typically Capitol-looking), oblivious to that big dripping Dagger of Death in the foreground.
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